Strolling in a garden
Full of flowers and green grass
Shining sun and flying butterflies
Humming birds with sparkling eyes
I was spreading my arms
Closing my eyes and starting to dance
And Then
I felt myself suffocating
Eyes started to bleed
The sun with shining rays
Was fading with all its heat
The flowers started turning black
The birds were dying
Losing their feat
The colors turned to black and white
And Transition was complete…..!
I shivered and shivered sitting on my knees
Till someone whispered slowly
This is not the world transforming
You have seen the reflection of inner self
Vague Spot where imagination and absoluteness meets…..
divinechaos
/ July 10, 2013Isn’t free verse fun? It’s exasperating to some but I love it. I love rhythm also but free verse requires no rules and has no boundaries. Lovely poem!
lalarukh1
/ July 10, 2013Yes you are right…I felt it quiet interesting and easy too 🙂 Thanks for the visit and comment…Keep visiting 🙂 xx
Geo Sans
/ July 11, 2013slam dance
~
interpretative words
mirrors waltz
piercing shards
lalarukh1
/ July 11, 2013yeah got the point ! Love your comment and thank you so much for stopping by ! Keep visiting 🙂 xx
Shuaib
/ July 11, 2013Is that your own poem? Very well written. I hope you write another one soon which starts from where this poem ended, and finishes where this one started. 😉
lalarukh1
/ July 11, 2013Lol you just gave me an idea ! Thanks so much. I never knew I can write something like poetry and I don’t think so I can still write it…These were some thoughts which took words and came out in the form of this poem….And yes this is mine lol Thanks so much for your comment and appreciation . Means a lot ! Keep visiting ! xx
Arindam Saha
/ July 11, 2013Lovely Poem! Very Meaningful! 🙂
lalarukh1
/ July 11, 2013Hehe don’t embarrass me now A very good poet is admiring my crap 😛 I appreciate it though 😛 Thanks for the comment xx
Arindam Saha
/ July 11, 2013No really, the poem is good. The meaning conveyed is so subtle… Truly, often its not the surroundings which change, but the viewpoint with which it is looked at.
Enlightening…
lalarukh1
/ July 11, 2013I am honored ! Really means a lot 🙂 xx
Word Wabbit
/ July 11, 2013I love this poem! Very nice.
lalarukh1
/ July 11, 2013Thank you so much 🙂 xx
Khaula Nazir
/ July 14, 2013This is so so so eloquently put. Loved it.
lalarukh1
/ July 14, 2013Thanks so much 🙂 To hear words of admiration from quiet a good poet feels excellent 🙂 Thanks 🙂
Khaula Nazir
/ July 14, 2013No problem. ;))
lalarukh1
/ July 14, 2013❤ 😉
Himani B
/ August 6, 2013you write beautifully! you got such talent! thank you so much for stopping by my blog and thus letting me discover yours. will follow up often, have no other option..I feel I have a lot to learn from you. wish you all the very best!
White Pearl
/ August 6, 2013Awwwh that gave me a smile 🙂 Thank you so so much really for the great honor to visit my blog and for all the appreciation through such cute words 🙂 You are lovely ! Your blog is awesome too and am sure going to visit it more often ! Love you so much 🙂 Wish you the same with prayers and love added 😉