Scared of Goodbyes
Afraid of departures
She couldn’t bear
Fearful heart and sorrowful sighs
The good bye hugs
The tears and moans
Pain rendering faces
Missing heart beats
The thought of never meeting again
The brain bangs
Beautiful memories fading into darkness
Of never ending forest
The thick fog of flashbacks
Was contaminated by thoughts of future
Nostalgia
The full stop
Was Β it all an illusion ?
Pain exploded out
Of everything
It started raining
As the sky felt her
Winds were companions
Soft and cool
Sadness prevailed
Silence shouted
Her soul shivered
She closed her eyes
Made fists
As if she was locking
Weakness in them
And
She left
Silently…..
Without saying good bye
She was scared of good byes
Harsha
/ November 11, 2013Now I guess this is dedicated to all your College Friends whom you left..But I guess friendship is such a thing that will remain forever,even if we don’t meet our Friends regularly..But the time spend with them is a sure thing to Miss..
Very Lovely Lines Rukh..Full of Emotions(Ab Rula hi doge tum.. ;))
White Pearl
/ November 12, 2013Yes you got it right….It is dedicated to my university life and friends….I will Miss them forever π¦
Thank you Harsha…as always your appreciation is much appreciated π
Haha I know ap roen gay naheen π
randomlyabstract
/ November 11, 2013She was afraid of goodbyes.. But goodbyes are so necessary. If there were no goodbyes, there won’t be any new beginnings. Start needs stop, stops need start. “and hence along the life you flow” π
Loved the post and his part the most:
“Nostalgia
The full stop
Was it all an illusion ?
Pain exploded out
Of everything”
White Pearl
/ November 12, 2013Oh Yes Meri Mariaaaa π You have got it right…. Theak kehti ho goodbyes nae hun gay tu new beginnings nae hun gi but good byes hurt yaar π¦
Thank you so very much for liking these lines and the whole post too ! Love you xx
randomlyabstract
/ November 12, 2013Yes they hurt. Bohat. But they’re necessary. I love that quote pata nahi kis ka:
Goodbyes are not forever
Goodbyes are not the end
They simply mean I’ll miss you
Until we meet again! (=
Love you more! π
White Pearl
/ November 12, 2013Oh I Love the quote too ! Thank you so much for your presence here Maria Darling π π
rjl2727
/ November 11, 2013painfully beautiful
White Pearl
/ November 12, 2013Thank you ! π
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katiemiafrederick
/ November 11, 2013The love you give to others spreads to others and is always alive..so there are no true goodbyes..only see ya lata..
As Love is always the drug..for life…
It will always come back to you..if you only trust IT…
IT IS ALLAH…..
So Trust ‘him’…
And LoVe…simply LOVE…
White Pearl
/ November 12, 2013Yes you are right…. There are no real good byes but in real sense I have said good bye to that worry-less life passed with friends…. I know friends will be here and we can meet.
Thank you for your comment π Love xx
Arindam Saha
/ November 11, 2013Tears emerge as goodbyes are said…
Emotions burst out as last visits are paid
Tears make way for new joys to emerge
Only impressions remain as past does submerge…
Koi nahin yaar… Dost to dost hi rahenge… Aur yaadein thode na dhokha dengi…
And BTW…
Mast likha hai yaar… π Tu to poet ban gayi… π
White Pearl
/ November 12, 2013Very right Bhae very right…. *Sighs*
Haha daikh le apna kamaal….abi b kehta hai tu intellectual banda nae hai…Poet bana dia tum ne muje ab aur kya chaye π
Arindam Saha
/ November 13, 2013Main intellectual bhi nahin hoon… Main to bus main hoon π
Aur kya chahiye mujhe? Chocolate… 5 star… Badi waali π π
White Pearl
/ November 13, 2013Hahaha Love chocolates koi b la de bari wali ya choti wali π
Arindam Saha
/ November 13, 2013Abe… mujhe chocolates chaahiye… tujhe nahin… Tu to aise bhi itni sweet hai… π
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Chal tu le le π π
Arindam Saha
/ November 15, 2013Oh thank you π
dontchawannadream
/ November 11, 2013Totally me… so afraid of goodbyes.
BEAUTIFUL poem!!!
White Pearl
/ November 12, 2013Ah Thank you so much π xx
beckarooney
/ November 11, 2013Just beautiful, truly touching words – thank you for sharing π x
White Pearl
/ November 12, 2013Thank you so much…I am so glad you liked it π xx
angelswhisper2011
/ November 11, 2013Very moving written, White Pearl. We don’t like goodbyes either, it’s to emotional. Pawkiss for a Happy Week my furriend π
White Pearl
/ November 12, 2013Thank you so much sweet friend π No one likes good byes ! Love you xx
Himani B
/ November 12, 2013this is lovely, goodbyes suck lol but do ponder on this thought by Rumi – Goodbyes are only for those who love with their eyes. Because for those who love with heart and soul there is no such thing as separation.
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White Pearl
/ November 12, 2013Rumi is right as always…. But you know he talks of deep down and we look for things on the surface π Love this quote. Thank you so much for the comment π xx
sabeelurrashaad
/ November 12, 2013It becomes easier when we realise we are on a journey in this life going back to our Real Beloved Allah Ta aala Who we will never separate from or say goodbye.
Rasoolullah s.a.w said to the meaning, ‘ what is my attachment to this world except like a rider who takes shade under a tree for a while and then carries on his journey and leaves it’
He is the best of creation and yet he also was born a yateem, bid farewell to his mother at a tender age. Then after that to his other guardians. He then bore the grief of separation from his beloved first wife, hazrat Khadeejah r.a in what is called ‘aamul huzn’ (the year of grief).
He was forced to leave his mubarak hometown Makkah Mukarramah and left with tears addressing Makkah saying to the effect, ‘ If it was not for your people forcing me out, I would never have left you’.
Allah blessed him with such a beautiful abode and warm people in madinah munawwarah, that even after the victory of makkah mukarramah, he preferred to return to spend the rest of his life in madinah munawwarah.
So this is life. Every day is a good day and so many people and places enter into our lives and leave and there are better still to come, inshaallah. Take it like that. When we were in primary we never thought we will such friends as that time. The same thought came at secondary school. Then at college. Then marriage is a whole new wonderful experience. A spouse I will never find a spouse like mine. Ummu salama r.a after says I never felt I could a better husband than abu salama till allah blessed me to marry rasoolullah s.a.w.
In dunya, all these emotions will be there but if our focus is on our meeting wih our beloved creator soon and knowing full well that in aakhirah the union is forever and ever then our whole outlook changes.
In aakhirah there is no grief, sadness and regret in any way.
afracooking
/ November 12, 2013Everything you write makes me think, touches me. What I feel? What I read? I feel so sorry for her…not because she feels it (pain is part of life) but because she turns her back on it. She feels it, but runs away from it. But if you do not embrace something you can also never release it. So through turning away from the pain she will paradoxically carry it with her.
Powerful words! Thank you for reminding me I need to face my sorrows!
White Pearl
/ November 13, 2013You are right Afra…she should not turn her back on everything that happens to her…..But she is not strong enough yet.
Thank you so very much for your great words…. I appreciate your concern about her π Love xx
enstarr
/ November 13, 2013Love it! Amazing articulation! π
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Thank you so much ! π
Vinodhiniharish
/ November 13, 2013Goodbyes.. The platform to make new relationships. Yet it will not be felt at the moment coz your heart yearns for the lost ones. Its a painful way of life ..
Beautifully scripted:)
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013I agree to your thoughtful words π Thank you so much for liking my effort. Love you ! xx
Krishnan P Nair
/ November 14, 2013Saying goodbye is always difficult. Nice poem.
White Pearl
/ November 15, 2013Yes you are right . Thank you for liking my poem π
Dilip
/ November 15, 2013Beautifully expressed and touching too. Regards π
White Pearl
/ November 15, 2013Thanks so very much ! π
bhartisingh
/ November 15, 2013A painful truth behind “Good Bye”
Nicely written.. and Saying Good bye is never easy !
White Pearl
/ November 15, 2013You are so right Bharti ! Thank you so much for your visit here and for the nice comment π Love xx
Nirmal Bajwa
/ November 19, 2013kabhi milata hai khuda bichadne ke liye
to kabhi karta hai wo juda milane ke liye
silsila yeh bara hai dard or sakoon se,
kush hoja ae dil yeh sochkar
ki ikk wazah or milti hai, kisi ka jikr karne ke liye
White Pearl
/ November 21, 2013Waah Waah ! Bohat khoub kaha ap ne π I Love it. Thank you so much for sharing it here….. Love you xx
Habiba Younis
/ December 25, 2013Beautifully captured in words π