Chalo ab phool chuntay hain
Bohat zakham seh leyay, bohat dukh utha leye
Chalo ab kadam barhao k khushiyan chunnay ka waqt aya hai
Ao khushiyun ko ik naya taaru’f detay hain
Janti hun bohat zakhmi ho tum, Lahulahaan hai rooh tumhari
Aj bhi zakhmun se khoon rasta hai k ye zakham bharnay k naheen
Aj bhi marham milta hai na marham laganay wala
Aj b dil k dard se ankhain bojhal ho jati hain
Per bas ab aur naheen
Rooh katti phatti hai tu kya hua…. Ankhain tu salamat hain
Saans bhi chal rahi hai abhi , dil b dharakta hai seenay me
Chalo k ab phoolun ko marham banana hai
In zakhmun ko pher se chupana hai
Chalo k ab ‘mein’ ko khatam ker k ‘tu’ hona hai
Tumhari kahani ka ikhtataam aagya
Ab Allah ki likhi hue kahani shuru honi hai
Aur Allah tu apnay wadun se kabhi mukarta naheen ?
Chalo k ab khawabun ko ankhun me utarnay se pehlay
Qatal kerna seekhna hai
Chalo k ab gham ko bhi khusi bana ker
Galay lagana seekhna hai
Ansun ko dil k under utaarna seekhna hai
K ansun ko pehchannay walay log khatam ho gay
Chalo k dil ko pathar kerna hai , Zindagi ko moum kerna hai
Khizaan me bhi phool chunnay ki adat daalni hai
Is umeed per k shaid ab khizan me b pattay haray bharay rahain
Umeed per tu duniya qaem hai
Chalo hum bhi umeed lagatay hain
Pher se dia jalatay hain…..
Chalo ab phool chuntay hain……
K kuch haq hamara bhi tu hai in phoolun per ?
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Yasmeen Baloch
/ November 14, 2013WAH yar,,what a poetry,,
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Thank you so very much Yasmeen ! So good to hear from you. where have you been ?
Yasmeen Baloch
/ November 14, 2013I have been here :0 but i have remained busy with school works,how are U?
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013I have visited your blog many times but you are not writing 😦 I am fine thank you hope you are fine as well. And hope your school is going good too 🙂
Yasmeen Baloch
/ November 14, 2013yes all are going good but i have some problems with my grammar so i don’t want to disturb you people with my incorrect sentences after getting it improved i will write Insh allah 🙂
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Haha Araay you write so well ye tumhain kisne keh dia k your Grammar is week ? Aur pher hum logun ki grammar konsa bohat strong hai ? Don’t stop writing please and you ll learn more by writing here. So please continue writing….You will see the improvements gradually, Trust me !
Yasmeen Baloch
/ November 14, 2013i hope so yar 🙂
znjavid
/ November 14, 2013Beautiful! Bohat khoob!
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Thank you thank you 🙂 xx
Arindam Saha
/ November 14, 2013🙂 Good… Very Good… Wonderful…
Chal tu bhi phool chun… main bhi aataa hun…. Pataa hai… phoolon ka bagicha bahut baraa hai… Usi bagiche mein kabhi mil jayenge hum kabhi shaayad… phir tu kuchh phool mujhe dena… main kuchh phool tujhe de dunga… taaki kisi ke paas bhi phool kam na par jaayein…
🙂
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Thank you Bhae saab 🙂 Your appreciation means a lot.
Haha phool kahan kam pertay hain…tu bantna tu shuru ker…daikhna barhtay jaen gay 🙂
Arindam Saha
/ November 15, 2013Wah yaar! kya baat ki hai… 🙂 Bade achchhe mood mein hai… aise hi rehna… Bahut pyari lati hai… 🙂
White Pearl
/ November 15, 2013🙂 🙂
Arindam Saha
/ November 15, 2013Oye… tere is title se yaad aayaa… you told me translate the poem for which I got the prize (couple of months ago)… Sorry yaar… bhool gayaa… aaj busy hoon… kal kar doonga… pakka… 🙂 OK?
White Pearl
/ November 16, 2013Aray haan ye tu muje b yaad nae tha…Sure sure take your time 🙂
Arindam Saha
/ November 16, 2013Post mein likhoon ya mail karoon?
White Pearl
/ November 16, 2013as you wish 🙂 Post me likho gay tu baki sab b perh sakain gay.
Arindam Saha
/ November 16, 2013Hmm
Arindam Saha
/ November 16, 2013How are you sister?
White Pearl
/ November 16, 2013Fine 🙂
Arindam Saha
/ November 16, 2013Pakka?… Mujhe to yeh mask waala smile lag raha hai…
White Pearl
/ November 16, 2013Pakka 🙂
Arindam Saha
/ November 16, 2013To phir post mein jo likha hai wo fiction hai?
White Pearl
/ November 16, 2013Nae wo b sach hai.
Arindam Saha
/ November 16, 2013Hmm… Take care of yourself sister… Itna aasaan nahin hai life mein dead end mein aanaa… Please understand… 😦
White Pearl
/ November 18, 2013Hmmm…I know brother….
Arindam Saha
/ November 18, 2013Hmm Hmm karna bandh kar… aur yeh dead end ki rat laganaa bandh kar… Aiwain dead end thode na aata hai… Agar aa bhi jaaye to aage rasta banaa lenge… kyun?
White Pearl
/ November 21, 2013Han bana len ge InshAllah 🙂 Koshish kertay rehna he tu kaam hai hamara ! Hope you are doing well an studying well too 🙂
Arindam Saha
/ November 21, 2013🙂 Yup… I am good… 🙂 Mujhe kya hoga bhalaa? 😛
White Pearl
/ November 23, 2013Mask tu teray pass b hai aik, I know 🙂
Arindam Saha
/ November 23, 2013🙂 🙂 Tab to yeh bhi pataa hoga ki us mask ke peechhe kya hai… Kyun?
White Pearl
/ November 23, 2013Haan thora thora idea tu hai….. 🙂
Arindam Saha
/ November 23, 2013🙂 Gud Gud… Zaraa main bhi to sunoon, kya idea hai?
Arindam Saha
/ November 16, 2013Waiting for a reply…
Harsha
/ November 14, 2013I am very very Happy to read this one Rukh.. 😀
Aakhir kuch aache wale likhe tumne.. 🙂
And always remember..If you want to be happ,no one can make you sad.. 😀
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Haha mujay pata tha ap yahi kahain gay 😛 😛 Thank you so much !
You are right ! But you know you can make me smile after all 😉
Harsha
/ November 14, 2013And That’s What I want to do…I want to spread Smiles…Because that is the only precious gift we can give to someone.. 😀
Lagta hai jyada philosophical ho gaya.. 😛
But You keep Smiling Always and Never let that Smile fade away.. 😀
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013You are so nice to think like this 🙂 Thanlk you Harsha !
Bilkul theak kehtay ho….Philosophy nae hai this is real 🙂
I will keep trying atleast 🙂 xx
Harsha
/ November 14, 2013Yes Try Try keep on trying.. 😀
Kyunki Darr ke aage jeet/khushi hai.. 😉
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Yeah very right 😉
abdulhaseeeb
/ November 14, 2013You wrote it yourself?
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Lol yes of course .
abdulhaseeeb
/ November 14, 2013Ooh we got a poet here 🙂 Nice one!
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Lol Nawazish hai apki bus 🙂 Thank you !
abdulhaseeeb
/ November 14, 2013Btw, follow Jaalib, not Ghaalib 🙂
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Sorry ? I can’t get it 😦
abdulhaseeeb
/ November 14, 2013Ghaalib aur Jaalib dono ne mehboob k baary me likha. Faraq yeh tha k ghaalib ka mehboob insaan aur Jaalib ka mehboob Mulk tha!
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Ohkaay I never categorized them like this while reading them 🙂 Thank you !
abdulhaseeeb
/ November 14, 2013You read Jaalib?
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013You are talking about Habib jalib na ?
abdulhaseeeb
/ November 14, 2013Yes precisely.
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Yes I guess I have read him some time ago.
abdulhaseeeb
/ November 14, 2013Well he’s awesome. “Me nahi maanta, me nahi jaanta” 🙂
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Oh Yes he is 😉
abdulhaseeeb
/ November 14, 2013🙂 Well, keep it up.
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Thank you so much ! I will 🙂
abdulhaseeeb
/ November 14, 2013I used to write a lot of poetry a year ago. But then I got this notion that poetry is too much imaginative to realize 😀
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013And you know what ? I have started writing poetry for about three or four months and I am loving it. You should continue too…You are an amazing poet.
abdulhaseeeb
/ November 15, 2013I’ll make you read some of my Ghazals. And yeah I’m trying to make a comeback 😉 btw poetry is intrinsic, we can’t force it 😀
Well, good luck for your poetry, and try to write about the society, current scenarios and taboos too; broaden the ocean of thoughts.
White Pearl
/ November 15, 2013Oh Yes absolutely right 😉 I read some your poetry already on your blog bohat acha likhtay hain ap and I would love to read more 🙂
Yes I am thinking about writing on these topics too. Apne ap se niklun gi tu kuch aur ay ga mind me 😛
And thanks for the suggestions btw 🙂
abdulhaseeeb
/ November 16, 2013thank you 🙂 I’ll post more from me.
Khudi se niklo mat, khudi ko samjho. Self esteem is the reflection of whole world in your third eye.
Haha I’m a bit too much philosophical. 😛
White Pearl
/ November 16, 2013Khudi se kon nikal raha hai bhae…mene tu ‘mein’ ko khatam kerne ki baat ki hai jisko ap ‘anaa’ b kehtay hain….aur ‘ana’ aur ‘khudi’ are two different things 🙂 I am like you in the philosophy thing 😉
abdulhaseeeb
/ November 16, 2013Well you said “apne aap se”. That was ambiguous. Its true, anaa aur khudi me ek baareek si lakeer he. 🙂 Isliae boht ehtyaat baratni parti he warna khudi anaa me tabdeel ho sakti he.
White Pearl
/ November 18, 2013Bilkul sahi kaha 🙂
Gaurab
/ November 14, 2013Beautiful lines, language introduce us to a totally new dimensions, the “essence” of the language. 🙂 Profits of being multilingual 😉
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Thank you ! Glad to know you could read and you liked it 🙂 Yes I enjoy the profits of being multilingual every time 😉
Gaurab
/ November 14, 2013See I do end up surprising people. without even putting much effort 😉 well written 😀
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Lol yes you do 😉 Thank you !
randomlyabstract
/ November 14, 2013“Chalo k ab khawabun ko ankhun me utarnay se pehlay
Qatal kerna seekhna hai”
Ahmed Faraz has got an answer:
Khwab Marte Nahin
Khwab Dil Hain Na Ankhen Na Sansen K Jo
Reza-Reza Hue To Bikhar Jayenge
Jism Ki Maut Se Ye Bhi Mar Jayenge
Khwab Marte Nahin
Khwab To Roshni Hain, Nava Hain, Hava Hain
Jo Kale Pahadon Se Rukte Nahin
Zulm K Dozakhon Se Bhi Phukte Nahin
Roshni Aur Nava Aur Hava K Alam
Maqtalon Main Pohunch Kar Bhi Jhukte Nahin
Khwab To Harf Hain
Khwab To Nur Hain
Khwab Suqraat Hain
Khwab Mansoor Hain
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Araay Waah Maria…Superb answer !! I love this one by Ahmed faraz.
randomlyabstract
/ November 14, 2013Shukriya Shukriya. 😉
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013😉
randomlyabstract
/ November 14, 2013Wonderful job done. Loved reading it!! 🙂 Beshak Allah ki kahaani tou ab shuru honi hy. Ham ne waqt hi nhi dya ke wo begin hojaen, apni chalaty rrehty haen. Jabky the Master Planner has some better plans in store.
Chalo ab phool chuntay haen. Ke khizaan tou beet jani hy. 🙂
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Thank you so much Meri nanhi Maria 🙂 Theak kehti ho….After all He is the best Planner 🙂 Khizaan k baat janay ka intazaar rahay ga ! Love you ! xx
katiemiafrederick
/ November 14, 2013ooohhh..I really loved this..even though I do not usually read this language well….
So i am a little scared to comment further..in case i read it incorrectly….
But smiles anyway..and love of course….
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Oh I am so glad you could read some of it. Thank you so so much ! You can comment whatever you want 🙂 Love you.
Tatsat
/ November 14, 2013Its very soulful. Somehow fits my current scheme of things 😉
Thank you very much for writing it out here 🙂
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Oh I am so glad you read it and liked it as well 🙂 Thank you ! xx
its-about one thing
/ November 14, 2013I loved this poem. Beautiful!
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Thank you so much…I am so glad you liked it 🙂
sheenmeem
/ November 14, 2013Great poetry.
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Thank you 🙂
Miss Maqsood
/ November 14, 2013Love it…too good yaar. Bahut hi acha likha hai samjh nahi aara kya bolun. 🙂
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Awww Kuch nae bolo bus ap ne keh dia aur hum ne samajh lia 🙂 Thank you so very much.
And I just fond out you have moved to word press ? Congrats 😉 Hope you have fun here !
Stefania
/ November 14, 2013Thank you for visiting my blog.
I tried to translate this poem, but I could not. I’m sorry.
Have a wonderful day! 🙂
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Awh I can understand…there is no software to translate this written form of Urdu I guess…Sorry for that. You too have a blast 🙂 Love you. Feels so nice to have you here ❤
Stefania
/ November 14, 2013Thank you for the information. I’ll follow your blog. 🙂
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Oh Thank you…I feel honored !
Stefania
/ November 14, 2013Big hugs for you 🙂
White Pearl
/ November 14, 2013Aww Hugs back 🙂 Love xx
Stefania
/ November 14, 2013🙂 🙂 🙂
Krishnan P Nair
/ November 14, 2013Acha laga. I thought Urdu and Hindi were different languages. But I understand what you wrote perfectly. Beautiful imagery.
White Pearl
/ November 15, 2013Oh Thanks so much 🙂 See I told you both languages are similar (almost) to speak 🙂
shakilakhtar
/ November 14, 2013Khizaan me bhi phool chunnay ki adat daalni hai
this line says it all
great thoughts and well written
I enjoyed it very much.
White Pearl
/ November 15, 2013Theak pehchana ap ne Sir 🙂 Thank you so much…I feel honored to read your comments about my writing !
amerbail
/ November 14, 2013It’s beautiful and very relate-able to me right now. Did you write it or is it from a poet?
White Pearl
/ November 15, 2013Thank you so much. Yes I wrote it by myself 🙂
Ajaytao2010
/ November 15, 2013Wah kya baat hai
bahut badhiya
White Pearl
/ November 15, 2013Bohat shukriya Sir 🙂
Ajaytao2010
/ November 15, 2013thank you dear
how are you dear
White Pearl
/ November 15, 2013Welcome 🙂 I am fine sir how are you doing ? How is your heath now ?
Ajaytao2010
/ November 15, 2013I am fine dear and okay
god bless you
and always be happy
White Pearl
/ November 16, 2013Thank you so much 🙂 May god bless you too xx
Ajaytao2010
/ November 16, 2013thank you dear 🙂
Love & blessings
White Pearl
/ November 16, 2013I am so grateful to you for your prayers 🙂 Thanks.
Ajaytao2010
/ November 16, 2013thanks dear
you are a very good child dear:) 🙂
White Pearl
/ November 16, 2013You are so nice to say that 🙂
Ajaytao2010
/ November 16, 2013yes dear indeed you are
be blessed my child 🙂
Dilip
/ November 15, 2013Subhan’Allāh! aapke khyal pad kar bahut achha laga!
Best always 🙂
White Pearl
/ November 15, 2013Araay Waah 🙂 Bohat acha laga ap ne perha. Thank you so much ! Love xx
sameernahar
/ November 15, 2013Wonderful read 🙂
Chol phool chuntay hai,
har kisi main nahin kaanta chupa.
Chal phool chuntay hai,
mehek hum bhi le aaj zarah
Kaanton se bahut bahut ho gaya ibtilla
gul se marham bana le ab hum zarah
White Pearl
/ November 16, 2013Thank you So much 🙂
Araay waah…..Ap ne tu shairi keh di meri shairi k javaab me …So wonderful ! Thank you so much.
sameernahar
/ November 16, 2013Aap ke hi toh lafz the, humey shayar bana gaye 😉
And, Thank you!
White Pearl
/ November 16, 2013Haha Shukriya ! You are a great poet yourself btw .
sameernahar
/ November 16, 2013Na … you are too kind 🙂
lifeconfusions
/ November 23, 2013Wowww…Buhat acha likhti ho yar..I’m not a huge poetry fan but I loved reading it. It was very easy to understand for me…”Chalo ab phool chunty hen” , I’m in love with the title ! 🙂
Yasmeen Sana Baloch
/ November 25, 2013http://peacefulmindblog.wordpress.com/2013/11/25/2013award-niminations/
Check it out 🙂
🙂